Here’s another snippet from my recently contracted novel. The dialogue starts with the heroine, Chloe, talking to Jorge.
“Admit it. You love me for my honesty.”
“Among other things.” His voice drops. “Too bad Naomi’s on her way.”
The look in his eyes has me envisioning all sorts of fun we could be having in the bedroom. If there’s anything Jorge and I do well together, it’s sex.
“Oh, don’t make me regret the opportunity to see my best friend.”
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Cute and playful. Damn when the friends pop over, huh? Congrats on the contract!
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I’m sure they’ll have another chance, no?
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Very spicy. Well done. I tweeted.
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FUN! Too bad they have no time….terrific snippet.
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Nice, playful vibe between them.
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Good dialogue, playful and fun. 🙂
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Oh, it sounds like a best friend betrayal, am I right?
Congratulation for the contract!
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